Sunday, November 25, 2012

Allegory of the Cave Sonnet

To be trapped in a cave
Shackled and chained never to be free
Only the brave can set themselves to freedom
They must open their mind
And let the light in
Awaken from the shadows
His imagination roams free
He who leaves the cave
Must come back and set the others free
We must stand together
Join hands in creating a new world
And discover things out of the ordinary
Leaving the cave isn't a mistake
But a challenge we must accept for everyone's sake


  1. Really good sonnet. The last two lines are awesome. Good Job!

  2. nice job. i enjoyed reading your sonnet :) love the last two lines!

  3. Nice touch with the prisoner coming back to help the others.

  4. I really like the second verse! That is really deep!

  5. I really enjoyed your rhyme scheme. Good job!

  6. The last two lines just killed it. Summed up the whole thing.

    Please comment on mine.